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Originally Posted by anna
Indeed it does Ziggy.
I wasnt nit picking your thread, I was merely trying to explain to other members and yourself why it came across to me in this way.
There are always ways to explain what happened in an event.
I showed two ways in my previous post that explains how the same incident could have been written, and the two ways that they might have have different impacts on the reader.
I have already apologised if this my interpretation is inaccurate.  |
fair do's, but english was never my strongest subject...and it certainly wasn't intended to be a bragging post. Situations like these is one of the main reasons i dont touch alcohol, and like i wrote in a later post, it could have been worse - luckily it wasn't!
If i can break up a fight before having to act i would gladly take that option, but in this case that wasn't possible i guess!